I'm not sure if I'd stick with that fading kick dealy-o, but otherwise the overall beat is pretty tight. Maybe add a pad or something in the background to help fill in the emptiness. Actually now that I think about it, instead of having the kick be loud and soft, (the loud is a bit too much) try making it distorted on the accented beats. That might work better...or not. You might also consider using a different kick than just the standard FL Studio Club Kick. It would help make your piece a little more unique, give it it's own flavor so to speak. Well, that's all I got for now. Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the review, ill have to try some of that sometime, only problem is i cant get the patterns back, lol working with FL 7 Demo, i had FL5 Producer but its just not working after my old hard drive fried. i was thinking the same thing on the drums, wish i wouldve used a different set of kick drums.
You never even put in the main melody!!
...Im sorry. But to be honest I loved the intro so much... Had to just use that XD
xD I don't know what else to say!
It feels like it needs to go a bit faster though
Is that you singing? 0_0
No, I am a man, dude.
Very Good, nice FX
When I listened to this, your score was 2.64...There's no way this deserves to be anything less than a 4.5
Thanks! I'm new to this site and just learning the ropes here. Thanks for listening and voting on it. I will keep puting new stuff up. Hope you like it. Anything important i need to know about this site?
Not too bad
Really it's not, I'd vote it a 3 probably, but I'm voting 5 because you obviously got some zeroes
I can't offer anything constructive to say for the artist, but a tip for all you listeners, download the song and listen to it like crazy!
Haha, if people were to actually do that it'd bring a smile to this face 'o mine. xD
Piano ftw! xD
You always win with the piano! Very soft and sweet song, if you could make it about 30 seconds longer it'd be perfect! I especially like :37. I was going to suggest using a string in the background, but then I heard the cello or w/e it is. Anyways, good work!
Cello? Must be a ghostie cello. I never put one in there, but I hear what you mean, it's actually just a very soft bassline. As for the + 30 seconds, I'd love to, but I really just wanted to get this little guy done with.
7h4nks 4 t3h r3v13w!
:D Elevator Music!
Very soothing! I don't know what else to say, I feel like I'm in some classy hotel someplace or something!
Yey! Oh, didn't you know? You ARE in a classy hotel. You're just dreaming this song and imagining you're somewhere else on your extremely comfortable 5 star hotel bed.
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